FRIENDSHIPFriendship is one of the most important things that we must have in life. They are the ones that stand by you when you are in trouble or when you face any problems. "A friend in nedd is a friend indeed." Friendship, might be the only thing left for you when you are in trouble.Friends play in important part in our life. They influence us, sometimes in both the negative and postitve way. Have you ever realize that you change to become more and more like your friends or that your movements and actions are being influenced by your friends. Such examples are often very common, so common that it is often overlooked. Have you ever start to hate a person just because your freinds hate that person, because your friends always say negative stuffs about that person? That is PEER PRESSURE. Just how many people could be unaffected by this pressure? You just become more and more like your friend each day?However, other than being influence, your friends are also the ones that are there for you when you are down. Who do you go to when you are facing emotional problems and you really need someone close to talk to? How many will think about their parents immediately? Friends are usually who I will choose to go to. Parents just do not understand our feelings. True friends might really be the one that you are left with when you need someone to talk to. Friends can also enrich your life with knowledge beyond all the textbooks and books. They might teach your valuable values of life which you might never have learnt without them. However, there might be cases where the values taught are negative.Friends plays a major part of our lifes. It is difficult to live a life without friends. However, we should be careful of who our friends are and when we found a true friend, you should really treasure it.
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@ 12:31 PM
Well written essay. The thesis statemant is relevant and there is unity in the essay.
OKAY.....
quite short thoughhh.. :D
Forget abt e previous comment. Here's another one..
Good thesis statement "Friends are impt.".
unity not bad.
wa yr blog so hard to read. anyway, link!:D
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July 29, 2008 at 1:09 PM